Commas splice (CS): A comma splice occurs when two independent clauses are joined by only a comma.
Comma splice: IC, IC.
Example: We hiked for three weeks, we were very tired.
Some Easy Ways to Correct Comma Splices
1. Change the comma to a period and capitalize the next word. (IC. IC.)
Correct: We hiked for three weeks. We were very tired.
2. Change the comma to a semicolon. (IC; IC.)
Correct: We hiked for three weeks; we were very tired.
3. Add a coordinating conjunction
before the second independent clause.
Coordinating conjunctions: and, or, but, nor, for, so, yet. (IC, CC IC)
Correct: We hiked for three weeks, so we were very tired
Caution: Don't simply delete the comma; this will create a run-on or fused sentence.
Directions: For each sentence below, write CS if the sentence is a comma splice or C if the sentence is correct. Correct any comma splices using one of the methods described above.
1. Every year I make New Year's resolutions, for example, I will try to drink more water.
2. Every year, however, I seem to fail at my resolutions.
3. I did not want to fail this year, consequently, I changed my resolution.
4. I finally understood that goals needed to be specific, so I modified my goal.
5. This year I will drink four glasses of water every day, this goal is specific and measurable.
6. While this is a measurable goal, however, four glasses of water a day is not sufficient.
7. I don't care, at least this year I will be successful.
8. Today I found out my bad cholesterol is a little high, therefore, I will reduce my fat intake.
9. I was reading the dictionary today, and I read that a "chrisom child" is a child who dies in its first month, this struck me a very sad.
10. Perhaps I should stop reading the dictionary, on the other hand, it is useful for correcting my spelling.
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